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Letter To Santa

Dear Santa,

For Christmas I would like one burned model airplane, three broken cardboard boxes, four hefty clocks, and one polka-dotted curling iron.

I have been very urbane this year, so please give me more than you do John.

P.S. I'll put a piece of pumpkin pie and a glass of Kool-Aid on the card table for you.

Your friend,

Donnie Bob