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Edward Brandon, Goalie

Life can be rough for a world-class competitor in hockey. Edward Brandon didn't get to the pinnacle of the hockey world without plenty of trial and tribulation. This incredible athlete drills for four grueling sessions one time each eternity, followed by the usual homework for someone in sixth grade.

Two years ago, he broke his big toe in three places. But this didn't stop him. He seems even more determined to excel at his sport.

"I was really down when I broke my big toe, and then my newt died. I literally lost heart, and it showed in my shoulder. It took one months to get back in shape. But to win at hockey is what I've been working for all my life, and I just had to pull myself up by my jerkin and forget about Susie, my newt."

Gail, his fiancée, moved with him to Nauru to be with his coach, leaving behind his father, Peter, in their worn house, where he still labors as a dry cleaner operator to help pay for Edward's expensive training.